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I took a look and would most definitely remove:
"All buyers are expected to wait up to 30 days for parcels to arrive" - It is negative and a seller should avoid all negativity from a listing.
"I know about the stupid seller manager tab'
???? What does that mean?
'I just could not bring myself to get rid of it ...."
There is no question in my mind that such negative "protect my backside" comment does cost you some sales.
If I were to see that in an eBay listing I want to buy, I would immediately hit the "back" button and find another seller who does not expect me to wait 30 days for my purchase.
There are thousands of competitors out there selling the same or similar stuff. Prices are competitive, so buyers often decide to buy or not based on seller's reputation and/or service. Telling me to wait 30 days for my "stuff" to arrive does not suggest "service".
That's me as a buyer. Other buyers may feel differently.
"What would you suggest as I have tons of buyers ask me after a few days"
I suggest:
1) You improve your shipping time to one day, five times a week
2) When confirming shipment has been made send a note to buyers giving shipping date and letting them know at that time (not in the listing) "the postal service usually delivers to their destination in five to seven business days. Please do not hesitate to contact me if there is a delay in delivery by the postal service."
3) Add a sentence in your listings "Feel confident as every shipment is fully insured against loss or damage"
OK - I looked at 321315527379 again.
Much better. I like KISS and this format is KISS.
A few questions/comments:
1) Your return policy states :
"Return shipping is paid by the buyer unless you receive wrong movie or item not as described then we pay for basic Lettermail return shipping"
When I read that, I notice the first few words "paid by the buyer". As a buyer, it does not appeal to me.
Would it not be preferable to state "Seller will pay return postage (lettermail) should I have sent the wrong movie in error or if not as described" ?
Both sentences mean the same thing.
2) Your shipping charges offer "free shipping" within Canada and very low cost (economy) to the USA BUT you have added a second and very visible and expensive "expedited" option to both. Is this really necessary? How many buyers actually ask to pay the extra $12 for a movie? Would it not be preferable to remove that extra shipping charge from the listing. You could add a note in the payment section about more expensive shipping methods (expedited) available if requested.
3) As stated earlier, I would remove "All buyers are expected to wait up to 30 days for product to arrive" from the "payment instructions" box. It suggests a negative bias added to protect your backside. Good sellers do not need to protect their backside.
4) As mentioned a while ago, I suggest you indicate your actual location, not a town nearby (Kirkland Lake). Coming from a very small but real location, not found on many maps, suggests it may take an extra day or two to get in the postal system.
5) Since you list on eBay.ca, why not incorporate the tax table? http://pages.ebay.ca/help/pay/checkout-tax-table.html
Brande, I agree with the recommendation to remove the "wait up to 30 days" statement, and I also noticed the "business" typo.
My comments relate to your font .... I'm a former book editor and proofreader .... so I view things like a critical schoolteacher 
Your listings look quite clean and neat; however, the Times Roman font you've used for all your info preceding the movie description is considered to be the most difficult to read. For ease of reading, any font without a hook is recommended, e.g. Arial, Calibri, Verdana, like you've used in your Movie Info.
I checked Competitor 291075872733 and I see that he has, as eBay and other sellers have recommended, aligned all his information at the left margin to facilitate the search by people on mobile devices. This is something I intend to do with mine but haven't yet got around to it.
Competitor 301087954024 -- the movie info box is very attractive and I notice that the additional info, although very lengthy, is also aligned to the left.
For what it's worth ........
"Where is this part revised in bulk .. It has been awhile and I can't seem to find it ... "
After you select the listings you want to edit, the bulk editor offers you many options.
Select "Edit Payment Information"
Then select "Additional Checkout Instructions" (at the bottom)
Enter new text in box.
"small things done right can make a big difference."
I totally agree.
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