Looks reasonable, I agree simple is best.
I don't really understand this part...
Any money orders in US funds can take up to 14 days to clear.
Any international money orders can take up to 14 days to clear.
Money orders, except fake ones, don't really need to "clear" at least not in the same sense as a personal cheque. I know there have been some cases of fake money orders but I think it's very rare and like counterfeit currency should be pretty easy to spot for anyone with a bit of experience.
Ben

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"What else could I do? I had no trade so I became a peddler" - Lazarus Greenberg 1915
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