"feel free to bash me I dont mind "
Great improvement!
A few points, if I may.
The template (on top) refers to "This Auction is For:"
At the bottom: "Please note that EMS is mandatory on all my auctions that end over 100$" and "happy bidding"
The listing is NOT an auction but a fixed price listing; the wording should be modified accordingly.
You also invite potential buyers to give you a reasonable offer - indicating you will accept less than the listed price of $400.00.
Different sellers have different policies, based on their market. As a long term policy, I never ever accept an offer at a price lower than listed. I understand other sellers see it from a different perspective anf that's OK.
However, the fact ytou are willing to accept a lower price indicates to me your $400 price is on the high side. As such, potential buyers may find it more attractive if you offered a $10.00 shipping charge instead of $20.00 (whatever it costs you is irrelevant in this context).
Your listing reads:
Shipping insurance
Domestic: Not offered
International: Included
Both should read "Included".
Your refund policy is confusing. KISS.
"They are 100 % authentic or your money back !"
"or" implies the possibility they are not authentic!
Keep your message positive, always.
Good Luck
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